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The Wise Ol' Hillbilly

The Greatest City
copyright 1990, Robert E. Dalton

      It may seem to some of the more fastidious critics, that a touch of pedantry has been injected into the following work. I assure you that such is not possible. Pedantry requires substance, and I am an "ignorant" hillbilly.

      Nevertheless, a story should be written in such a manner as to depict its primary subject, and the subject of "The Greatest City" was a very ostentatious person. Hence, a very ostentatious writing.

      Nehemiah Jones believed in the absolute supremacy of man and the non-existence of God. He was the epitome of the arrogance of mankind. Therefore, he was chosen as the objective of a heavenly pedagogue and given a divine and profound education. It is regretful that such an education could not have been given to the entire human race. The world would have been vastly improved.




Man has envisioned, concocted, created,  
Built and bought with blood 
A myriad of monuments, an endless, torrential flood 
Of mementos, reminders, convincers of his dominance 
O'er this wretched sphere of mud. 
Indeed, 'tis an abominable, detestable, near unbearable blow 
To his inflated, pompous ego; the unalterable fact, you know, 
That his dominance is limited 
By a pallid thing called death 
With whom he must inevitably go. 
This indomitable thing called human 
Cannot choose concerning birth. 
Not place, not time nor station 
Nor standard by which his worth within the masses 
May be decided when he is sown upon the earth. 
With all his depth and intellect, 
His greatness to display, 
He's but a child 
who's given a set of blocks, some clay... 
A construction set of sorts with which to build, 
To play. 
And yet, he deems himself the master, 
Conqueror over all, 
Reeking in self-esteem; 
Wallowing in a spectral fantasy that he is lord and ruler, 
Emperor supreme. 
Never grasping in his shell of clay 
That he is subject only... 
Far from king. 
In this sad state with obstinate gait he treads  
beneath his feet 
All that's worthy, all that counts, 
all that makes life sweet, 
And stacks his blocks and molds his clay, 
And builds his own retreat. 
He creates, within his fantasies, great monuments. 
And in his dreams 
He erects the latter on marble base,  
And with genius caulks the seams. 
Then he thumbs lapels and boasts and blows 
About the greatness of his schemes. 
And so it is that man the great 
(If such he can be called) 
Sets out to build great cities, 
Polished, paved and walled; 
Laid out neat by block and street 
And buildings, huge and tall. 
Then sits he back in great armchair 
And gloats, and admires his feats, 
And lays at night concocting more between his silken sheets. 
And thus, 
In smug retirement and vain precepts, 
He sleeps.


'Tis one such man upon the which our story now expounds; A man of great achievement, an egotist, Whose audacity knew no bounds: A man convinced; A man to whom mendacious dreams of grandeur made the rounds. His aspiration to preponderate was totally unsurpassed. He fancied him the greatest, And of deed and word, The last. For this reason he was selected By the forces he denied, To be de-gassed. He was Nehemiah Jones, An atheist, A firm believer in non-belief Who constantly, emphatically asserted That man was creator-in-chief Who came and went without repent, And death was a random thief. Nehemiah possessed a propensity for surmounting The greatest heights, Which afforded him an unobstructed view Of all the numerous sites Upon which stood his colossal feats, His monuments, His delights. 'Twas a day such as this, While he was enthralled with the splendor of mankind, That Nehemiah was visited, though totally unaware, By a form from the divine; A realm to which, as we know, our subject was utterly blind. The specter incarnated then (In the accepted form of men) In Nehemiah's rear And embarked upon his heavenly task by emitting guttural sounds As if to clear his throat And note that Jones was aware of his presence 'Ere he ventured near. But so engrossed was Jones In ecstatic admiration of his glorious panorama That he did not hear the sounds, And thus was oblivious to the drama That was destined to change his views and renew his outlook On heavenly phenomena. So the angel employed bolder tactics To make his presence known And loudly crushed through the brittle brush To the side of Mister Jones Upon whom he laid a hand Of heavy flesh and bone. "Egad!" Cried Jones. And spinning 'round, found the vision’s eyes, Not knowing that he looked upon An angel in disguise. "You startled me!" He yelled aloud, "You took me by surprise!" Upon recovering From the shock That he'd received at the stranger's hand, Jones glared at him contemptuously, And failed to understand how anyone Could possess the gall to encroach Upon the confines of his land. Then he opened up a pompous mouth And cocked a vile tongue And prepared to lash the stranger with a tirade which, When done, Would certainly set him on his way In a fearful, breakneck run. But before the first of the vehement curse Could be volleyed on its way, The stranger lifted an ominous hand which, Somehow, Seemed to stay the onslaught of insults That was about to come into play.


"I am here," the stranger spoke In a sternly commanding tone, "To reveal to you a city much greater, More magnificent and more splendiferous, Mister Jones, Than mankind, throughout eternity, could ever build with stone." The statement, Thus spoken, Bewildered and belittled Nehemiah's mortal brain To such an extent he felt it nearly impossible To contain the surge of rage within his breast, And yet, he managed to refrain. For there was a greater compunction consuming the rage within; An overpowering urge, A compelling desire, A yearning to see this city not built by men, Which quelled the anger, Contained the fire, And stilled his quivering chin.


Then a finger of the upraised hand of the stranger Made a gesture Which imposed upon Nehemiah A desire to follow this intruder in alien vesture, Though his beleaguered brain Was churning with apprehension and implacable conjecture. But as Nehemiah ventured motivation He was beset by consternation. His feet, he found, had left the ground, Which caused great aggravation to his already entangled mind, So he deemed it his imagination. But the sights and sounds encountered, He found, Called for amendment to this conclusion. Though reason bore no confirmation, He was certain 'twas no delusion. So he threw his arms across his eyes And relented to total confusion. In a fleeting instant, Though it seemed to Nehemiah to have been hours, His feet touched down on earth once more In a field of swaying flowers whose colors Brightened the purplest depths Of the most profuse of oaken bowers. A moment passed 'ere Jones regained composure in his plight And recalled the promise given Of the most magnificent sight of a city Of stupendous magnitude, And recalling, he bolted upright. He looked to the north and glanced to the south, And scanned the east and west. He scoured the valleys and searched the hills And peered as a man possessed. Then he faced his companion With hands on his hips, And mouthed a violent protest. "You've not been duped," the angel spoke, Perceiving Jones' innermost thought. "The city's here... 'Tis how to look, and thus to see, You've not been taught. And for this reason, and for this cause To this place you've been brought." "Your mind's awry, Nehemiah, and your values Are ignorantly misplaced. You deny the worth of the precious, And your arrogance Is a total disgrace. You worship that which is worthless, You're a smudge on humanity's face." With these harsh words, the stranger Thrust a finger t'ward the ground And bade Nehemiah genuflect, And made him to sit down and look beyond the pointed finger To a tiny earthen mound.


"'Tis the first and lower part of the city," began his ethereal guide. "You would designate it ant hill, Yet 'twas built with forethought and with purpose, Not for pride. "And nothing that man could envisage could match the intricate construction Of the tiny halls inside." Then the stranger, by some form of magic, Made it possible for Jones to look Inside the mound, beneath the ground, Where hundreds of chambers and nooks were astutely designed And then intertwined by the hallways of access Their frequenters took. There are throughways for supply transportation And byways to nurseries for the young, Escape avenues designed to be used if the city Should be overrun. And each thoroughfare, with meticulous care, Is maintained by the workers when done. Nothing was built to serve pleasure, No energy wasted on pomp; No ostentation, no silly oblation For the deities of artistry to stomp. Survival and welfare stand prominent. No space is wasted for romp. And yet, the results of their toil Would please the architect's eye. For everything built serves a purpose, And in purpose a beauty doth lie; A beauty inherent, though seldom apparent to the mundane passer-by. "You will note they strive in harmony," quoth the angel, "And with infinitesimal brain, they labor On a vast metropolis that, With ease, Puts mankind's best Efforts to shame. Study it well, Nehemiah, And consider, and compare it with your own meager domain." "Trash!" Yelled Jones, with sanguine face. "Pure trash! Bunk and balderdash!" Then he shrieked again, "'Tis an insect's den!", With a voice both irate and brash. But he glanced once more through the tiny door Before stomping away through the grass. "Now come with me," the angel spoke, "and we shall view, Before we retire from this place, A much larger mound, Tall as a man, Even higher." And he led Nehemiah across the field To a colossal earthen spire.


"This, Nehemiah, is but another marvel Of the metropolis that dwarfs your own. "'Tis a termite mound, a city in itself, Built while the great winds have blown Your man-made mockeries back into dust, And laid your great monuments prone. Study it closely, inspect it slowly, And consider the fact, mister Jones, That nowhere within this architectural wonder will you find One solitary stone. 'Tis constructed with substance that lends it adhesion That man has never known." "You see, Mister Jones, Mankind must take from without what his structures require. But the builders herein produce from within The substance which molds this great spire. Yet, no time was spent to research or invent, 'Twas given, not born of desire. The colossus was formed through knowledge innate, Not from years of studious pain. The builders have squandered no time in pondering, Or trying to rely on the brain, But merely undertake to create and use Of that which was freely obtained. A man could not hope, in the limited scope of a lifetime, To learn to apply even one tiny fraction Of the principles in action When these little laborers ply The skills they possess, and with total success, Achieve perfection a man would not try." This time there arose no cry from Nehemiah, But he stared with a vexed expression, And an envious twinge tickled his bones, (Just a touch of a jealous infection). But the redoubts of his mind were stubbornly inclined To relinquish no sign of impression. "After all," he reasoned within, "They're just random, makeshift dunes. There's no careful planning, no study of stress Or alignment of doorways and rooms. Though, admittedly, the structures serve purpose and need, They flaunt no stately festoons. They possess no beauty, no loveliness of line That results from the tedious hours And pains of perfection that must be suffered To adorn man's prodigious towers." And here, his thought-filled train was derailed As the stranger drew eye to the flowers.


"These are the asterisks used by the power Whose existence you stubbornly deny, To punctuate places of beauty on earth That would tend to elude the eye And thus give cause for ineffable pause To delight the passer-by. Lock a lingering look on these petals my friend, And concentrate on recollection of any great thing You've built or you've seen That matches the brilliant reflection of coruscating hues Through the prisms of dew When the sunbeams display their affection." But Jones could not find, in the halls of his mind, One memorable thing that he'd seen; No marvel of men that could even begin duplication Of the radiant scene That gilded the fields and brightened the hills And speckled the valleys between. "If it's beauty you seek, it's here at your feet, And it covers the land over all. And it springs from the earth in a miracle of birth That answers the season's call. These, with the grass, form great carpets That mankind could never install. They are constructed," the angel continued, "And do not, as you believe, spring from space. Each fiber Within each delicate stem Was intentionally set in particular place And interwoven with infinite care to provide Both style and grace." Again, Nehemiah lent wings to his eyes And scanned the Beautiful scene. And he could not contend that the frail arts of men Could mimic the hues 'mid the green. And to carpet a city, rather than pave, Was an insurmountable Thing.


"And now, come with me to yon hollow tree, A structure which has survived two thousand years." And he led him near, and once they had arrived, With a tilt of his head, the stranger led Nehemiah's eye To a honey bee hive. "Now gaze within, you worshipper of men, And feast your arrogant eyes on a masterpiece of symmetry." And, to Jones' dismay and surprise, He arrived at a precipice of truth, And his pomposity began its demise. He peered with astonished amazement at the thousands Of intricate lines That intersected, with minute precision, And formed to perfection, Repetitive, angular designs. "All these were constructed," the angel asserted, "In the space of a season's time." "How can it be," mused Nehemiah, "that creatures devoid Of a highly developed brain Could devise this equiangular edifice, This symmetrical domain, And defy the science and knowledge of man And put his great works to shame? But the truth is still the truth, And therefore, I cannot decline to acknowledge The immanence of an intangible fact: In the depths of their acts is entwined Somehow, somewhere, an elusive force that endows them With singleness of mind." "It cannot be," in his mind thought he, "that creatures so Tiny as these Could formulate, much less create, without help, Such a thing with complex expertise." Then he turned to his guide with a feeling inside Of respect, and sank to his knees. "And now, Nehemiah, we must traverse the sky Once more 'ere my work is through." And thus saying, the stranger gestured once more, And again, Nehemiah Jones flew like an Eagle awing 'Till his feet felt the cling of soft earth Again 'neath his shoes.


In a valley they stood, in the midst of a wood populated By gigantic trees. "'Tis the great sequoia, whose battered cortex Has weathered the eons with ease; Whose towering heights are home and delight For the birds, the animals and bees." With consternation, Nehemiah's eyes embraced The awesome scene. And his diminution increased as his ego began To careen through a violently rushing torrent of spillage From a broken dam Of self esteem! "The size is the thing," the angel erupted, "The huge, Gargantuan size! Engulf if you can, you minuscule man, Just one, In the scope of your eyes." But to look upon one could not be done, But by sections, Nehemiah surmised. "So, Mister Jones, have you ever beheld A towering spire such as this That was built without stone or mortar or bone, Yet brushes the heavenly mist And prevails against blend of wild storm and wind, And all the great elements resists? The problem, my friend, with the cities of men Is the fact that they cannot grow— Cannot reproduce what's destroyed by abuse From the heat and the rains and the snow. And the miraculous thing, I shall now bring To your attention before we go. The materials required by the builder, This tremendous colossus to form, Need not be hauled in by ten thousand men Who would toil ‘til weary and worn. All that it needs is in one tiny seed Akin to a kernel of corn.”


“And now, before we depart, Nehemiah, let us briefly epitomize Concerning this beautiful city and its vast, Incalculable size, And touch upon the things you’ve seen And the things you’ve realized. All you behold is constructed with particular purpose and call, For nothing exists without reason, And each is important to all. From beneath the turf to above the earth, In this city, nothing is small. The city’s floor is carpeted, and the peaks of its spires Enwreathed. It has existed from earth’s beginning When the first breath of life was breathed. And, unlike the cities of man, it will, Till the sword of time is sheathed.”


With this last word, a hush occurred, And a heavenly breeze wafted by Which separated human from the divine And whisked him back on high, Till at last he stood where at first he’d stood ‘Ere the angel ventured by. Yes, true enough, ‘twas his favorite bluff Overlooking that built by his hand. But the luster was gone from the white, polished stone, And the towers didn’t stand quite as tall. And the great city wall no longer dignified the land. It stood as a blot, and marred the spot That had once been beautifully flowered. And he realized, as he fixed his eyes on the awesome, Ivory towers, That the land he observed would have been better served By planting more beautiful bowers. No usefulness lay where the mortar and clay Joined the sculpted stone. No function was served by the delicate curves Interlacing the marble and bone. In a few meager years it would all disappear, This glory of man would be gone. Then he turned on his heels And looked over the fields and valleys Across the lands, And then to the ground, at a miniature mound, And he knew that omnipotent hands had fashioned it all, The huge and the small, Where the “Greatest City” stands.



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